Comments of chapter undefined of In the World of Sword and Magic as Space Marine

Thanks For The Chapter and Hell Yeah !!!! Brother, you finally gonna make a Chapter ( Space Marine Chapter not Novel Chapter ) for the MC !

that's heresy if you think that we will give up the Dreadnaught just to become a Grey Knight then we should cut you down and burn your corpse for that heresy that you just speak off the dreadnought is now our bottle brother so we cannot betray him by joining another chapter

Really going for "The greater good" approach... Well it was good while it lasted, every new 40k novel I've been reading are pacifying Space Marines so this is nothing new I suppose. Just wished it last longer until he was "forced" to work with xenos.

changing from black templar to grey knight might course a issue. if the mc dont have a realy good reason to become a grey knight then he atleast need a common goal to forge a alliance between the 2 chapters and a few brother captains, or it could become messy...

thank you for chapter, now continue or your Nigerian prince-couson gets it

Yeah use the spark to summon my fav Tyranids we will devour this world.....

If mc use the fragment not only an aoe will happen mc will also become a vessel to the fragment it will be pretty cool (see If the emperor has a taxt to speech device episode 26)really like that part and that one scene is epic))

👍👍👍

Sanguinala

Thanks for the chapter

yes yes great job bro hope your new years were great much respect and love for this story man thank you and even tho its late happy new years

Great work keep it up but don't forget you have to enjoy yourself as well if you want to keep going have fun and have a good time ✋

Every chapter is so good it leaves you in anticipation for the next.

amazing more please

Happy new year and it was AWESOME.

thanks for the chapter.

This is great thank you for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter

Are going to Make mc a hybrid of both chapters