Comments of chapter undefined of The Bet
The Bet
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if I am to live with two girls with similar backgrounds, I'd be having more headaches than I do at work lol. đ
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Love this racy story. Am interested to find out what happens next. It is contemporary and easy to relate to. The idea of the bet is clever and is a substitute for the endeavors of online dating which is a feature of modern life. English is not the first language of the author and I noticed a reference to "Her and her friends" which of course should be "She and her friends". I also noticed one error - a reference to Louis XII which should have been Louis XIII. All in all a great read. I am waiting ...
