Comments of chapter undefined of Rightful Vengeance

Guod

Really good so far! Excited to see where this goes!

What a brilliant opening for your novel!! You have hit it out of the park with your narration! Great work. I will come back and give it a PS vote. Ran out of all my PS today. XD

If I were to speak myself, I liked this first chapter, as the world-building is introduced well, the twist of the story is given and it was interesting overall. A caveat would be the occasional lack of punctuation and very slight grammar errors. Another thing is, the narration of the book and the way it is written sounds very formal and that might intimidate some readers, in my opinion. Otherwise, good prologue!