Comments of chapter undefined of Poison God's Heritage
Poison God's Heritage
Biako
Chapter comments16
in this chapter and the one before it i went against all of what cultivation writers do. they all use third person to describe what happens. but they all fall to the same mistake the worst mistake a writer can do when writing. Show, not tell. most would just say person x faced the tribulation he felt its threath blah blah blah. i used first person through the whole story so thst every reader here can imagine themselves in shen bao's shoes. i want you alll to be the main character to see what he sees feel what he feels and never tell you what you should experience but i'll always present the experience of the events to you and your own feelings will surge move and tumble along the main character. i want to create a world in these few words i wrote where you, for just a few minutes can feel that you have been extracted from where you are, pulled from the real world and thrown into my book. i wish that i managed even for a few moments to kidnap you and take you to my own world if i did please inform me.
