Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

yay don't quit and upload more as soon as you can ,can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks, a 1/3 of that chapter was interesting!

I dont know if i am a good reader but i think you should focus on characters and their personality too, while they have a difference they must not be downright wild, proud, saint etc. An author gives life to a character and that is what i think you lack there....................(I hope I didnt piss anyone off)

The real question is if we get an extra Christmas bonus chapter

Fantastic

Merry Christmas Author-Kami

so good

THIS IS MAGIC!!!

Have a very merry Christmas, Thanks for another great chapter looking forward to more!

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author 😜 A Fantastic Chapter As Always 😉

thanks for the newest hit of my favorite drug just in time before Christmas, and Happy Holidays Author-Kami

Thanks for the chapter and FIRST

I guess it's safe to say that shes still oblivious about his other identity. Uh.. what's with Martha's surprise? It sounds like she didnt know about him being at the school or anything. What would examining him recently have to do with any of what he mentioned about Voldy in the past? Maybe I misread or it was worded wrong. No one questioned him when he said he held back on why he did so? Figured he would bring up the prophecy when they asked but no one asked at all?

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Thanks

After you finish this what do you plan on writing next?

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Thx for the chapter

Merci pour le chapitre !