Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

I love that the author calls probably one of the best harry potter fan fics “average”.

Thanks for the chapter

This is one of the best Harry Potter stories i have ever read. tbh sometimes i feel like im reading a book by J.K. Rowling. Keep up the amazing story

great job as always 👍

I wouldn't say average, I would say consistent. It might seem average to some people, but that's the hazard of writing OP MC, at some point when everything comes together, the story becomes predictable, but not in the bad way. I would compare it to spaghetti made by mom every friday, and mom happens to be a good chef who owns her own bistro.

It might be average for you, but you firget that your story, although average plot wise, is very very readable and have good grammar. Which most fanfics here doesn't seem to have. So yours is pretty high end actually.

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author 😜 A Fantastic Chapter As Always 😉

I thank you for the chapter.

The preparation and equipment is totally 'Overkill' 😂

why didn't he give his friends "holy water"? This would strengthen them by curing the bodies of hidden injuries and flaws.

I forgot Their animagus forms, can anyone enlighten this lost lamb?

thanks for the chapter

Quite the overkill preparation they have made, i'm not saying it's bad though, better be safe than sorry... now, time to rename this novel "the overgeared wizard"! 😎

How does MC know it can deflect killing curse did they test it on mice etc I hope later one of the MCs friends literally tame a dragon,

Bro that's total overkill

average? this isnt average! this is truly a masterpiece

Reminds me how much I hate Tonks barely existing in the story. Let alone more.

This chapter is all about when the students chooses their character creatures.

Honestly, I duno other but for my your writIng style and story background is very suit to mu taste xD