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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Jarqill
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BreezyNovels
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I am just waiting for the education system to be reformed from its current barbaric practices in Hogwarts. And the apartment plans, though I also like how victoria is independent and making strides in the medical field. Hogwarts is a backwater school that restricts what students can learn out of fear and also punishes and rewards students based on academic performances. Those punished are supposed to be outcasts and those rewarded are supposed to be popular. Not only are the teachers useless and the classes dumbed down, but many classes have been removed. This kills the future of the wizarding world and promotes stagnation.

Alzas_Regius
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Thanks for the chapter :)

AvidReader962
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Absolutely awesome concept with the holy water, and great that the longbottoms are being helped. Though I am surprised that she wouldn’t agree with his more ruthless methods, considering her upbringing, her knowledge of how horrible death eaters can get, and his evidence on how lackluster and corrupt the justice system is, I figured she would understand the more ruthless methods. Oh well. Once again, thanks for a really awesome chapter.

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MrMike
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Thanks for the chapter!

Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv13Mr_Shang

I just hope he don't drop the novel, sad vibes.

Chaosking24
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dont go where i cant follow - i promise - a few years later Mc: what the **** i am acending to godhood Tori: hey you promised to not go anyware i cant go

Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv13Mr_Shang

Can we have a chapter author? I need my drugs, I'm addicted at this fic D:

Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv13Mr_Shang

Why I can't drop my stones at the book? Wtf Qidian always doing shit with this site.

fangman
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When will you update the story

MunchMan
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does he still have 2 animagus forms? His 2 creature essence has turned into one by the ritual and he only has one core now.

Sevennamed
SevennamedLv12Sevennamed

Thanks, more please.

Willox
WilloxLv6Willox

Looks like the MC has shared another big piece of his darker self with Tory. This will no doubt cement their relationship in a even firmer foundation. Thanks for the chapter.

Pro_Gamer_161
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Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author 😜 A Fantastic Chapter As Always 😉

Alabado_sea_gonza
Alabado_sea_gonzaLv2Alabado_sea_gonza

If you need to rest then do it, no one but you can make you write. And great chapter, I quite liked the letter haha ​​it was as if the old man had spit in both of their faces

assad1830
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love the story, thanks for the chapter. i only hope that you(author) to stop making the MC apologize too much

NumbLove
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This was a sweet chapter

Irishdamned
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I thank you for the chapter.

Goldenswiftreader
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Holy 3-eyed Raven, that's darkest light

roseblooddiamond
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will Amelia and Susan ever get to use the holy water

Michael_Scotts
Michael_ScottsLv4Michael_Scotts

Good chapter.