Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

I think you forgot to tell neville the speech about his father, should have said something akin “Neville listen to me, You are not your father, you should not try to be your father, you’re Neville, and should try to be better than he ever was, your father’s wand is important to you and to your grandmother but that is all it is, your fathers wand, it’s not yours and sadly it will never be, you need your own wand, one that not only would work better with you but one that will let you grow into being better than your father, one that would make him proud that you’re his son” or something similar to that

dude all your characters arcs feels forced. First example is Harry and MC who you tried to give the feeling of big/little brother between but to me, it felt like the MC trying to force himeslef into Harry's life. Second, in these last few chapters, MC is telling everybody who listens about his backstory and shit and try to make everyone feel sad for him. At least, that's what I felt.

Author, you do realize that there's no vote option on your novel, right?

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author 😜 A Fantastic Chapter As Always 🤠

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author A Very Very Very Great Novel 😀 With A Fantastic Concept... Pls 🙏 Don't Drop

he should tell neville to get a new wand and not work with his fathers wand.

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter :) Considering Neville's parents Psyche'are broken, with their bodies being perfectly healthy, won't occlumency and Legilimency be helpful in healing them? :)

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Nice. More please

I think this would have been a good time to tell Neville about his wand and maybe say he needs a new one because it is not rightfully his and that is why some spells and stuff is harder for him

I thank you for the chapter.

Would be nice if he helps him more. Great chapter.

Thanks for the chapter!!

thanks for the chapter! keep up the amazing work

Another really enjoyable chapter. Thank you very much. Considering the healing powers of phoenix tears, I wonder if they would help Nevils parents if the tears were directly injected into their brain, maybe healing the damage the torture curse did?

author please be honest you remembered neville now right ?