Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

As a suggestion author, try to use more paragraphs in the fights scenes, just using a large one make it seem shorty and a little bit chaotical. Nothing else to say regarding how you describe it as it was pretty well made, only those wall of texts.

HElll fucking YEAH! Spitting out straight FACTS!

A very fun chapter. The fight was bad-ass and how he handled things with Snape and then Dumbles was also freaking awesome. My only complaint is that he earlier was going on about not changing things so he could know how the future would turn out, yet then he goes and completely does the opposite lol. I guess you could say he just had a change of heart in the heat of the moment... But yeah, he did a complete 180 there.

How did no-one say this before but... Fatality!

Just an FYI, the hallowe’en spelling is a shortened version of All Hallows Even which is what it was called in old England

Little sister figure.. eh it can change after several years but eh..

I'm really holding myself back not bashing the story for the no consistent writing.

dislike hes not been using his physical traits much, anyway time to put this in the newspaper

McGonagall

😂😂💀 laughed hard af when he said “I’m just gonna ignore that idiot “

Headshot!

hahaha~ I really like how detail you put in this novel and all make sense. good job !!

I thank you for the chapter

I thank you for the chapter.

Ownage to the max.

Hogwarts Halloween Feast

Thx for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!!