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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

RealStarling
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How do you know how powerful other people's magic cores are? You can't see them. Also, I don't believe some people would feel the need to push theirs beyond what they are comfortable using.

Baneofthedragon
BaneofthedragonLv5Baneofthedragon

Would have been badass if he was a wampus cat

uniquelyweird
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I'm legit thinking of this knife as Yondu's (I think that's his name) arrow from The Guardians of The Galaxy

qwertypous_046
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i think you should have choosen philippine eagle for his bird animagus. If you search it on google i think it look closer to a phoenix.

Kreeezyyy
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Thought its phoenix

Ahtu_Flagg
Ahtu_FlaggLv4Ahtu_Flagg

Not horrible choices. Outright great in terms of now living creatures. However, if you aimed for extinct ones, you could have become an Argentavis och some abbrevation of the 10-13M crocodiles. The kind that ate even T-rexes upon occasion.

Kratos_theLycaon
Kratos_theLycaonLv4Kratos_theLycaon

Will he register his forms? His aunt is in charge of Law enforcement and he plans to showcase his forms for his transfig. mastery

LongSongGolden
LongSongGoldenLv14LongSongGolden

honestly the knife would probably have been better designed as a throwing knife or a barebones (haha) dagger, but being a combat knife with a leather wrapped handle will sorta limit its capabilities (can slash and stab but that handle will snag if you try and go right through, too bulky). I'm sorta imagining a KA-BAR or a bayonet style combat knife, though I guess given the setting a Fairbairn Sykes maybe be more appropriate.

Laoo_OAL
Laoo_OALLv3Laoo_OAL

Asgardian
AsgardianLv6Asgardian

MC really should have 2 animagus forms the phoenix and the cat. The cat form could help him with stealth ops

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

Goldenswiftreader
GoldenswiftreaderLv5Goldenswiftreader

Fly like an eagle, let your spirit carry me.

Johanna_Bernhardt
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I was wondering if you thought about putting a safety feature in the knife. Because if a thought can trigger it how can he avoid hurting some he cares for when he reacts out of reflex when beeing stated or scared

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers

dual is cool but a hybrid of the tow would've been cooler. a gryphon type

HaremsSuck
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when I first read this I was like cool two forms but then I was like why not combined the together?

Eleesar_Talcontar
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Thanks for the chapter!!

anzafay21
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thanks for the chapter! keep up the amazing work

Hakkira
HakkiraLv14Hakkira

Danke for the chapter 😊

AvidReader962
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Thanks for another really awesome chapter