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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

RealStarling
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I love how you wrote Tonks. I think it came across as very true to her character.

RealStarling
RealStarlingLv2RealStarling

Oh, I almost forgot! Where is Sol???

NiceGuy
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where did Sol go?

CherryShrimpSire
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is his hair still long? if it is, then he's hella hot

tetlay
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wow that conversation wasbartificialy cheery and all you feel is arkward when you read it. author-san you need more dialog in your dialoug. am i imagining it vor turned the mc into hermione for a secod XD

DaoistXhuIcQ
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Meh. I've always loved She-who-must-not-be-named Tonks, thanks for this one

scarlett_hellsing
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where is sol?

uflesh940
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This is so bad. I can't read any more of this.

Brian70707
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What happened to snack lady

Chris_McGuire_5839
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Possible Tonks and Aedan relationship?

DaoistXhuIcQ
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not gonna lie, She-Who-Must-Not-be-Named Tonks has always been one of my favorites in the HP-verse

Irishdamned
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I thank you for the chapter

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

Goldenswiftreader
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What advice did he give Tonks?

Michael_Scotts
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Great chapter.

DeathLingers
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Nice. hope he doesnt try to force himself to make friends. how he interacted with her was perfect so he should just ignore those around his age since talking with a bunch of brats would drive him insane

Endless_Crow
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Thx.

Zachariah_Browning
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He should make a trunk or suitcase like Newt Scalamder’s but bigger and better when his in his two or third year or higher

Eleesar_Talcontar
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Thanks for the chapter!!

anzafay21
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thanks for the chapter! keep up the amazing work

yuki_lyn
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thanks

Name2486
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thanks for the chapter.