Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

why does every male mc have long bloody hair I swear 9 out of 10 novels I read have the guy have shoulder length hair or long hair why not short like most guys am I the only one who gets annoyed at this lol

2 years and he still doesn't know how to control his eyes ?, he learned magic without a wand and transfiguration alone in a matter of months ....

Maybe its pettiness or being stubborn but if I was him and I got Dumbldores gift I would just broken them and mailed it back to him.

Who the **** writes on books? Who asked him to correct the books? Why would he fucking do that. Thats fucking stupid. The only point was for MC to flex on his aunt. retarded FUUCK another retarded fanfic.

here we go again a mc want to be op before beginning of the school.why not just study in Hogwarts.

Just the way he says it kind of bothers me, idk why. Be a little more subtle why don't ya

I hope he didnt stop practicing his wandless magic. That would be a massive waste. I get the feeling instead of taking advantage of his wishes which would allow him to become very powerful wandless with practice he will instead focus on his wand.

Why tf does he need to babysit her daughter? She's telling him as if it was his responsibility, I would lash out if it was me. Another disgusting parenting

I stopped reading this fan fic. There is no character devrlopement or a progression in the storyline. Why do you think your main character has to be op, overall this is drivle masquerading as a fan fic. You do not take on a beloved work if you aren’T adding substance to the Origonal works. there is no substance here. Its Unimaginative Unoriginal and uninteresting.

maybe i read it wrong but wasnt he an ***** before? he acts lile a small child all the time. also he acts kinda retardet, maybe because of the torture? hope it gets better soon because if the mc stays like this it will be insta drop

Why doesn't he gell her to give Sirius Black a just trial ??? He can also illude about the fact the it was wormtail that ratted the potters out q, then transformed into a rat ... This way , Siriys can be out of Azkaban , raise harfy , and maybe also be Aeden's teacher .... Then ,he can meet amelia bones ... (I geard that sirius & amelia enter a relationship)

from every aspect jk romling script this albus dumb many name door was **** off evil that play by rules, owh my God if I'm albus, i'll constantly orgasm thinking not only one puppy's soon to be potter but other magical beast in wizard form bone's puppet, owh owh owh stupid lamb author, very good to made a perfect lamb soon to chops MC, be a shepherd please~

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some of you ppl can't appreciate the hard work that goes into writing a book!

I thank you for the chapter

I imagine glasses like Gojo

I thank you for the chapter.

hope he does make some laws to help her try and implement

Aedan Bones road to Hogwarts to study to all these wizards