Comments of chapter undefined of Of Heroes and Royals

That was a great way to start a story. I really liked how the story advanced because of Alice's destiny. It was also nice to see that you kept it a secret until the very end. I think the main cast interact with each other is going to be a lot of fun. Oh, and I also liked how you keep the destiny of 2 character a secret, especially because Naios' destiny is unknown even to himself. Those two could prove to be a lot more important to the story than they first seem to be.