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Comments of chapter undefined of The Sage of Einar

Swapnil_Dhande
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well I don't think author should use our world as background because this may looks like to easy to predict the reaction of characters and also God is real or not is not a issue but how religious beliefs are definitely people who say religion free is basically a hypocrite because most off the time we get to see something in religion such as in Egypt mycology the technology they have are not till this time recreate and plus the issue with how character development I mean how he really accepted reality and first thing he makes is a weapon i mean doesn't he first make any sense and clinge line such makes mc looks like a waking hypocrite how denied reality and wants to concure the continent I don't know but this looks like a pre planned sat up to me literally he created a javelin and gunpowder telling her and also offering her knowledge on medical I think he's mind became radical and revenge on God like shit stuff after death of his wife and daughter and here we sleeping on bed with another woman in just a day after it it makes no sense to me 🤦‍♂️well going to read so more chapter before decision I have bad habit of comparing every such novel with realse that witch so don't matter my opinion on this one

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Alesro2019
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Thx Chapt

wcpwnsuto
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im sorry to say but that little amount of trade is not going to change history not even close... he only has 1500 people even if he made a thousand grenades per person every year it would still be insignificant

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baniel_stone
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I like the story so far maybe go easy on the American Indians

Ha_Loo
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why the story feel like rushing...

Usman_Hali
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon