noticemesenpai2000
hello author đ¤ im sorry if what im going to say may seems like me complaining abt your story but believe me i do not it's just me giving my opinion from my pov huhu.. but but before that i wanna say thank you for the chapter âşď¸ so the thing is i think it would be nice if there was a mention of Lucas being a dancer and mybe abt his frustration regarding the second place before he knows about Elijah bcs you know atm this chapter seems very "information dumping" and so sudden, it feels like that moment happened bcs of plot đ i mean the story somehow doesn't flow that nicely? huhu i don't know if you get what i mean đ well the chapter is good but it's just what i feel? anyway just giving my two cents, please do ignore me if you don't get what im saying hehe đ