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Comments of chapter undefined of The Dawn of the New World

FeatherInHat
FeatherInHatLv15FeatherInHat

this chapter is bs and felt so arbitrary. came out of nowhere, made no sense, is changing the plot super significantly way to early in the story to make sense with what has happened before this chapter. I'm debating whether i should read more or not. the premise of the story was good but this execution, sigh.

Necsys_Coldheart
Necsys_ColdheartLv15Necsys_Coldheart

Yeah no the whole sealing of the memories and multiple personalities is to sudden and i dont like it soooo

Tyr25
Tyr25Lv5Tyr25

What happened to the Khan family? Are they forgotten now. I don't like where this is going the thing with his eyes is so sudden, his previous backstory is now useless. It's like all over the place?

Eternal8Nimra
Eternal8NimraLv6Eternal8Nimra

what is this? throwing so much sHiT in so suddenly with no explanation whatsoever is just......(╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻ can't say i'm a fan of this new development.

DamonC
DamonCLv11DamonC

honestly this chapter is underated it's hot a good bit of development that would be based off his passed like a "restricted side" if anyone could just remember when he lost his cool as a kid and beat the bullies you'd see that there are connections...jeez

ayayaya
ayayayaLv15ayayaya

'I am the edgelord and you are my citizens!'

AshuraDaoLord
AshuraDaoLordLv14AshuraDaoLord

Mindset of the author the last few chapters has been all over the place, sigh i thiught this was houng to be a good type of different but this is on the same level as some apocalypse harem system bs

Joseph_Hope_2244
Joseph_Hope_2244Lv10Joseph_Hope_2244

the storyline changed so fast, it lost my focus. My brain doesn't like that so I'm stopping here.

Divine_univers
Divine_universLv15Divine_univers

I'm gonna keep reading but this honestly made me ask myself if I was still high from the night before and forgot some chapters

Infinitia
InfinitiaLv6Infinitia

We? Like ‘We are venom’? Or We as in more than one?