why adding a squirtle to the team??
He sits out on bulbasar and charmander but then takes squirtel? Should have taken something other then a starter. You also have the growlithe and cubone, that didnt have much „screentime“. I think your bloating the team to much to early.
thanks for updating this again psych. this fic is one of the good ones imo. it is actually sad that not many of them continue for all that long before getting dropped.