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Comments of chapter undefined of The Gamer in Another World

KingGeorg
KingGeorgLv14KingGeorg

If lightning hit an antenna why was he killed ?

HENTAI_SCAM
HENTAI_SCAMLv2HENTAI_SCAM

Exp

HikaYami
HikaYamiLv12HikaYami

It really needs editing... I’ll even edit it because it seems like an okay story. It’s just the grammar

Ellyejah_Angol
Ellyejah_AngolLv3Ellyejah_Angol

bad grammar needs editing

malachi_Pharr
malachi_PharrLv4malachi_Pharr

Definitely needs work. Grammar problems, cringeworthy character reactions and sayings, and a stupid death that defy's common sense (and not in a good way or even amusing way.)

FrostyB
FrostyBLv15FrostyB

Grammar has maximum the good of quality

ASexyCrow
ASexyCrowLv14ASexyCrow

The Caveman gamer

Light_Sword
Light_SwordLv2Light_Sword

X

anime_watch_9852
anime_watch_9852Lv14anime_watch_9852

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Leylin_Farlier
Leylin_FarlierLv13Leylin_Farlier

P

Reika_8353
Reika_8353Lv3Reika_8353

a

Reika_8353
Reika_8353Lv3Reika_8353

a

I_am_inevitable
I_am_inevitableLv13I_am_inevitable

tr

Reika_8353
Reika_8353Lv3Reika_8353

a

Reika_8353
Reika_8353Lv3Reika_8353

q

Reika_8353
Reika_8353Lv3Reika_8353

a

Ken_Meadows
Ken_MeadowsLv15Ken_Meadows

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Reika_8353
Reika_8353Lv3Reika_8353

uwiaiiaaj

Reika_8353
Reika_8353Lv3Reika_8353

Abc

Reika_8353
Reika_8353Lv3Reika_8353

a

Theslayer351
Theslayer351Lv2Theslayer351

You say "hmmf" and other grunting sounds way too much Just saying, real english speakers or humans in general, dont speak that way. Unless your really wierd.