Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal's Wine Store
The Immortal's Wine Store
Malignant
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I don't like the introduction of the female characters. My evaluation of this novel dropped a little. Is this going to be a harem?
Thanks for clarifying that. I was surprised at the inconsistencies between former and later chapters. You are right in the fact that MC doesn't mistreat women and doesn't consider them romantic interests. But all the powerful female characters introduced so far are either mesmerized by his looks, power or both and have romantic inclinations towards him. I find that a bit disappointing. Why can't a female character find him powerful and just admire him? Why the need for them to fall in love and follow along like puppets? I also find the lack of male characters(who are not villains or admirers) concerning. Why can't the MC take on a male apprentice? While I am glad you have many powerful female characters(compared to most), we need similarly powerful male characters too... Otherwise even if it is not a harem, it gives the ambience of one. I hope you don't find my review offensive. I just feel strongly on the subject.
Malignant:i didn't write the first 49 chaps of this book. and if this part here is too much for you, i apologize for that. up unt the recent chap, the mc didn't mistreat any woman nor play with their hearts. as for it ending as a polygamous book, that's highly unlikely to happen. (I'm replying using my phone. i hope you don't mind my trash grammar)
The sudden appearance of the girls were rather abrupt. kind of feel too forced, they just came into being like that, from the system, too convenient, and if I may add, too lazy. it would be better if they have some kind of background story. but, I can accept if they were some kind of AI or robots. soooo, idk if I will continue reading, have a nagging feeling this kind of setup will happen often.
