Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal's Wine Store

hmm sucks he has to recultivate but looking forward to him ruining people and the worlds he goes to. dont want an ass system I despise mcs that get pushed around

well, the names of the ingredients are extremely long but the author knows how to cook 👍👍👍

considering the wine takes a few months to make he should have a couple loyal customers by then who will be willing to try it

All those dishes sound like they would be some pretty good shizz

Chinese naming conventions with the their overly long descriptive and/or overly exaggerated names have always annoyed me, but they made sense. At least tangentially. The names in this on the other hand do not. They are long, but just sound weird and immersion breaking. They should at least have some logical basis and the order needs to be right. You can’t for example call something a vine vampire and expect it to be understood as a plant. Also what is a Viper Magma Chilli? Is it an animal, a plant or something else? Also if you’re writing an ancient cultivator setting with a native cultivator, using modern measurements, scientific names, etc is again massively immersion breaking. And please don’t quote me on this, but the fermentation method you described sounds like something used for making beer not wine. Maybe make your MC make all sorts of alcohol in that case atleast and not just wine...

--'{@ | Hope he can make use | The drinks that he produces. | He needs to rank up.

That food sounds good...

remind me of gourmet from another world

I'm so confused on the cultivation levels.

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thx for the chap

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What are the cultivation realms exactly? Even a 10th-ranked god should be some mortal cultivation level from what he is saying. This is probably a lower world or something like that.