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Comments of chapter undefined of Twilight: Primordial Chimera

Master_Livythan
Master_LivythanLv3Master_Livythan

the rewrite was a bit cringy at times but pretty good all together. I'm looking forward to the next chapters a little advice from a fellow author, the longer you put off something the harder it is to get back to it take it from someone with several stories on haitus

KoRSito
KoRSitoLv4KoRSito

the time between each chapter is not already a hiatus? I think it would take 10 or 20 years to get to the 2nd or 3rd movie of the twilight saga... hahahahahahaha....😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Danny10
Danny10Lv13Danny10

This is honestly a good story and I hope you could continue with it !😌

ABCsect
ABCsectLv4ABCsect

i like this book please continue

John_Levi_Hahn
John_Levi_HahnLv2John_Levi_Hahn

I really enjoyed the amount of the story you had and was wondering if you were going to continue it for a while now please keep going I really enjoy it.

mrayj45
mrayj45Lv5mrayj45

I like this

Apple6769
Apple6769Lv14Apple6769

Continue

JokesOnYou
JokesOnYouLv3JokesOnYou

Patients and actual updates work wonder. Not a good thing when your story always feel like it’s on hiatus. Enjoyed it tho👍👍👍👍

Burning_Toast
Burning_ToastLv14Burning_Toast

please continue 🙏 this is great 👍

Liam_Cole_8926
Liam_Cole_8926Lv4Liam_Cole_8926

Awesome story so please please continue the story

Joseph_Johnson_4363
Joseph_Johnson_4363Lv4Joseph_Johnson_4363

I like the story and hope you continue writing it.

Cringezzz
CringezzzLv14Cringezzz

Please continue, this looks very promising .

LordRavenclaw
LordRavenclawLv13LordRavenclaw

love it. please continue

Djay_ghost23
Djay_ghost23Lv14Djay_ghost23

Continue

Emanuel_Alegre
Emanuel_AlegreLv3Emanuel_Alegre

Continue

Pippofarina
PippofarinaLv3Pippofarina

Continuaaaa plzzzz

DRACONIAN619
DRACONIAN619Lv13DRACONIAN619

thanks for the really great update and keep up with the really great work and please don't drop the story

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

Bruhhhh