Comments of chapter undefined of Twilight: Primordial Chimera

Err I feel like things are left to vague. I mean his family asked nothing about his powers or how he got them, they didn't ask if there are more supernatural creatures out there. And then his conversation with Alice was so short when they both had been revealed as supernatural creatures where he was invading their territory. This isn't a bad story, I'm not trying to say that, but it just lacking in some ways

Who in the harem can bella and his mother be in it

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Gud

thanks for the really great chapter and keep up with the really great work and please don't drop the story

Please write more its one of the better ones I've found

Can you please do more chapters

Awesome chapter please do more

love it. please continue

Thanks ✌️

I know the multiverse theiry but understand, he would be Telling her that he knew her from a Movie and a Book, that makes prople go into existential crisis mode.

thanks

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