NightHowl
I don't rly get why everyone is hating on the ancient one. Like are you serious? I admit it was harsh, HOWEVER. Now he can move on... Do none of you get that? Frankly, I'm glad she did it... now we don't need to read about the mc losing himself for revenge etc etc He knows why his parents died and have now killed ALL the people responsible in the atk. He has gotten closure and can start to heal from the tragedy. He can move on with his life, find more people to care about, get new friends and overall lead a much better life. What would you have rather the mc go mad with nightmares, revenge, have no friends, remain broken etc? Or would you want I have mentioned with the healing? Pretty obvious answer tbh It was harsh but necessary. Plus the isn't exactly normal, he has killed a ton of the monsters and looked at war. Making him more mature plus has his system with him. The only part that I didn't rly like in this chapter was how Dante was way over the top like srsly. He has been doing what to the mc? Throwing him in the sky etc? Like he has been done any better than the ancient one? It was hypocritical af of him. The samurai dude did the correct thing and has been the only one so far to acc treat the mc right. (other than Chris and the other guy) Hope Dante isn't the main character cause to me he has been quite annoying. I mean I love Dante usually but how he is portrayed so far I seriously just find him annoying. The other thing I disliked mainly was how over the top it was with the end of the universe etc. Like man that was taken way to far... it was totally unnecessary. I hope the story doesn't become super dark and agnst... kinda fed up with those stories. I mean I dunno why everyone is writing all dark af sht now... I mean I know it's dark times but have some positivity. We have enough dark sht in irl don't need it when reading now as well :/ Was hoping this was just gonna be a cool mercenary story...
Dude, the ancient one is playing Dumbledore ... To me it just looks like she's playing him as a chess piece out of fear Really? It was one thing if his mentality was totally mature, but it isn't ... She sent a child on the day of his parents' death knowing that he couldn't do anything. This was not therapeutic, I am absolutely sure that this is not how to overcome the death of parents and if the author makes the protagonist act as if everything is going to be fine it will only be stupid.
Ok, so I'm not really happy about this ch. sorry but it's the truth. For my taste it's to heavy handed in the forshadowing and the Drama department. The world you build is already messy enough, a messy and confused MC makes it even more so. For me personally we are dancing on the edge between Action Drama and cringe, i really hope the story doesn't get any more convoluted.