Comments of chapter undefined of GOODEVIL

There was a few problem. I recommended you to download an apps called "Grammarly" it's available in play store. And also, I felt that there was something was missing. The way that fat guy died, doesn't have clear explanation. I mean I guess you should add more things like "sound of flesh was squishing as that man stepped on it." Or something like that to make it more darker and interesting death.