Comments of chapter undefined of H Mission Commencing!!
H Mission Commencing!!
Kahel
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What was this doujin called again? Its for research purposes..! I need to look up how this 3 girls look like.. Or someone who have the pictures can just reply to this..
Author theres a review for youšššš 1) Author your Sex scenes seems kinda bland. Solution :- A) (Ex:- Tachibana Sex Scene) Make it more kinky, like talking dirty while having sex cause when you talk dirty with your partner it increases your horny levels to extreme or at least high. B) Use Metaphors :- Replace "Pussy" with 'Moist Cave' or 'Raging VOLCANO' etc etc. Replace some *** description feeeling to metaphors, if you want some research than go to Literotica (Ex: "MOMMY SLUT" series upto 2nd chp/ "Back seat Mommy" Both these series are written by the same author) or read thisā” "Kaminari" by Cosmic Sky in FF. Net. C) Scene:- Make the scene of sex a little bit hot. For ex:- Dumping his 'Energising Liquid' inside her 'Vacuum Cave' he removed his cock while still resisting the suction of the said cave. The sudden withdrawal of his 'pipe' made the exiting of 'holy liquids' very easy while forming a thin bridge with the tip of his 'pipe'. Seeing this bridge and the spilling of liquids from her 'cave' made his blood rush to his 'pipe' again, seemingly telling him that it was ready for another "sucking and pumping" session. (šThe scene of 'bridge' makes this situation a little bit hot. And there are also adverbs are used) D) Make the sex dirty :- Research shows that over 50% people loves dirty vanilla ***(not NTR). Then why not add a Condom belt and some cum spilling out of Condom on her body. Oh and also don't forget to add sweat.
