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Comments of chapter undefined of The Black Dawn

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hydracule
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I like the way you described the whole city. its really well done and I wish you luck on your writing journey.

EvanBardiel
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Thanks! I really appreciate it. Sorry for the errors and mispellIngs i dont Have an editor. Iv been working on DeVeloping every Part of the workd, From the civilized thre’a, to the southern coast of la’velle and the continent to the east. Hopefully you guys enjoy this book and want to read the second. This book will have 70 chapters before i move to the second one

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JinnaDennis
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Vertigo makes it hard to read! :( Just with a few paragraphs your world is amazing! I am going to absorb this one so give me sometime to review.

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Joey_Ting
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subscribed. Because the sentences made an image in my head

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Nickjr321
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Thanks for the chap