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Comments of chapter undefined of Soul Of Negary

JoN
JoNLv4JoN

This whole arc is stupid

Negative_Reviewer
Negative_ReviewerLv12Negative_Reviewer

I'm no writer but other characters are always essential in most stories. I haven't read Journey to the West but if I ever were going to become a Chinese styled writer that is an obligatory read. But I digress back on point. I remember reading this manga "Toaru Ossan no VRMMO Katsudouki" a long time ago. Not the novel but the manga. The only reason I remembered it was because of what you mentioned, about side characters. The main character of that novel is a solo-player but it has a pretty diverse and returning cast of characters. You might find some inspiration in reading that manga. Or maybe not. It was the only specific work that came to mind regarding what you mentioned about side characters. Also if you have read it yet Renegade Immortal has an interesting way of dealing with side characters. The All-Seer specifically is an interesting way of writing a villain. The All-Seer and his rival with the Qilin were also an interesting relationship. That's what I can recommend for side characters. If it is what you're after that's great. If not then so be it. Good luck in your writings. I've seen you ask for a lot of advice here and there about specific points and I'd heavily recommend you to just start writing. There is no sin in returning and fixing your earlier writings if you haven't published it. Also making a roadmap like the creator of Reverend Insanity did for his new novel seems like a smart idea. I hope you succeed and have a good one.

MyriadChanges303:yow about the thing I mentioned, do you think that for MCs who would lack a reason to interact frequently with others it's really necessary to give other characters directly related to the plot more screen time or is there an additional way to deal with this?
SageYash
SageYashLv4SageYash

I both love and hate the fact that im unable to predict accurately what will happen next in this arc

SolEspectro
SolEspectroLv5SolEspectro

Dio are you ?

Jack_N_Mikhail
Jack_N_MikhailLv15Jack_N_Mikhail

thank you for the chapter

IDK2388
IDK2388Lv13IDK2388

thanks for the chapter

Royks
RoyksLv11Royks

Thanks for the chapter!

MyriadChanges303
MyriadChanges303Lv4MyriadChanges303

can someone recommend to me some REAL lovecraftian novels like Lord of the mysteries and embers ad infinitum. I've successfully wrote the premise for four of my five ideal novels but I want to make an even more horrifying world. I refuse to stop until it truly balances off the op -ness of my MC while making it scary and horrifying