Comments of chapter undefined of Deep In The Mud

Deep In The Mud

Akia200

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_Ocelot_Lv14_Ocelot_

The concept is very interesting. I can live with the grammar errors, but for 8 & 9 coins per chapter (and I buy coins), you need to proofread at least once to be sure that the character names are correct because the lack of care feels like a rip off and I'm not paying to read more chapters of this poor quality.

3yr

Akia200AuthorAkia200

Thank you for your feedback, l will ask someone to proofread my work because l am clearly failing in that department.

3yr

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_Ocelot_Lv14_Ocelot_

Hi- The only real issue was characters being identified by the wrong name. The plot twists are great! I'd guessed that H was Akai's father, but it never occurred to me that he was attracted to Aurora from the start. Can't wait to see Celia get crushed.😄😄

3yr