Comments of chapter undefined of Falling for the Bad Boy in the Reverse Harem Game [BL]

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I like the pacing. I’m not bored and I’m not feeling rushed. I also like you’re use of description here.q My only suggestion is to remove your use of “the singer” when describing Haruki. You’ve already told us he’s a singer. We don’t need to be reminded of that fact since him being a singer is irrelevant to this situation. It’s more important to emphasize Haruki’s emotions/confusion. So far I like where this is going. It’s not what I expected in a good way. 😁

I can't wait to see what happens next. And the singer's reaction to the bad boy was so cute 🤭

I have a feeling that I'm going to have to go back to this chapter all the time to remember the names and who he is, lol

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it's funny

quero mais,

so far so good

thank you for the chapter author

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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