Comments of chapter undefined of Falling for the Bad Boy in the Reverse Harem Game [BL]

The comments on the otome characters were so true!

nice style, cheers

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This is a really good start. I’m drawn in and eager to read more. I only provide comments that are meant to help the writer (pointing out grammatical errors or suggestions). Some writers don’t like this. As such I will only continue to comment if you would like me to. Thanks for the pleasant read.

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thanks

hmmm its a promising story! thanks for he hard work

Nice!!

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See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

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First chapter and I'm already beginning to like it ..lets see how far this goes

What a great start and well written too. I am looking forward to reading more.

love it