not sure why but author your writing style feels weird hope you can improve in that aspect and plzz use single coma when he is thinking and double coma when he is talking it will make readings easy. dialogue seems haste and forced when he meets 2 mobs. otherwise a nice story
plz author explain details nicely .....
like how the predetor skill works and how he got it ....
all this thing your novel is missing ...
plz fix does otherwise your novel is gona hit the rock bottom soon...