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Comments of chapter undefined of Minimal Power

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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

Mc is in another SUPERNATURAL world and its like he dosnt care. No reaction to losing family or being in another world

Worldtraveler
WorldtravelerAuthorWorldtraveler

Hey! I appreciate the feedback! I realized this later on; I tried to focus more on the world-building than early character development. Unfortunately, there are definitely some drawbacks. I'm going to keep this in mind going forward, though!

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Groblin
GroblinLv10Groblin

Thx