The_Wild_Trill
Try to take some time on this verse because you've left some loose ends (like the part where ophis meets sora in the void, (can't remember his name) and then she talks to Rose saying they would mark him as her partner, but still nothing has happened on that subject) and also many relationships that were progressing, you have stopped progressing them and it would be good if you made the relationships progress a little more before jumping, for example you could make it do something against EXE by giving it a mission that of something interesting and useful for the future and along the way you can also improve sora's relationships with the nobility of rias and sona until they are love interests (if you want they can also be other girls like rose and ophis that you already left a seed for it some chapters ago, or another girls too), but at the end of the day it is your story and this is just a personal opinion, I look forward to the next chapter and keep up the good work :)