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I am not too sure about this chapter. Lin Fan has been shown to be the exact opposite that is written in this chapter. What exactly are you trying to portray here? Lin Fan has every resource possible in his hand to save his family without being humiliated and at the same time show his power to the surroundings without showing too much. From my understanding, I think you want to create a drama similar to the one in One Piece where Shanks/Luffy/Zoro let themselves be humiliated but when it happened to their closed one, they fought back. That is great but I think the situation in this chapter is not suitable at all for this. Anyway, keep up the great work!
It would be better If a trade was made, the life of the the Feng family for the life of his family. Seriously, I think it would’ve been better if he started killing. If he did, the Feng family would understand that kidnapping his family was the worst idea they ever had. And to live, the guy next to the hostages would’Nt move a muscle unless he wanted to die too.