Honestly the more and more I read this story, The more I see that being a pokemon trainer is just a garbage job made for the rich only. like without system MC would be Trash.
Skipping the highly anticipated evolution of Vulpix was bad. I like this story and I see the necessity, but I wanted to read about her reaction nonetheless.
Looks like one of Crobat's Thief disappeared but I don't think you corrected the chapter second one was added and I'm not sure if you took out the he first or second one. Also, Bastiodon's Taunt!