alex02373
dude i personally your pokemon fanfic is the best along with 'u know nothin jhon snow' and the pkm series written by bannix on fanfiction.net website. But yours still tops the others because of your stories length,depth and the realism. And most importantly the steady updates. the other two have stopped. i sincerely hope you complete yours. dont mind what other say and just do your thing.
thanks for the chapter. and I want u to knw that this is one of the best pokemon fics I have read. that said and all I was actually surprised when I read the authors note I actually thought u forgot about the rich girl wasn't she gonna take revenge or smt did she give up because she believed he wasn't worth the attention or she saw him winning the tournament. and I'm pretty sure she knew he wasn't with the league before so wouldn't she make trouble using that or use it to blackmail him or did she just assume he was actually pretending to not be part of the league would be great if u could clarify this she didn't look like some one who would give up so easily.
BRO ese es el autoestima que me gustaria de los otros escritores si son criticas constructivas son aceptables pero si lo que quieren es lloriquear o esta novela no es de su gusto hay mas de 10000 que pueden buscar tu sigue con lo tuyo la historia esta buena y explicita si no entienden algo es que no lo leyeron el capitulo conpleto SIGUE ASI. PD: tu como que le compraste el producto a vandal que promociono en 10 COSAS BUENAS DE LOS VIDEO JUEGOS que buen producto debo decir.
i like this novel because It takes a more adult and realistic route in comparison to the usual Fanfiction with steady update. no harem Is another plus for me, there are too many on this app. the only thing that i would like to see Is a photo of Pokemon after second generation and an explenation of the abilities (in chap. comment) because i'm too lazy ti Google It😋. about the no complein whats so ever👍. if i could make a request It would be that if you had ti drop this for whatever reason to write a summary of how you would have end It (too many good novel don't have One😔)