Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon: Master of tactics

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Sorry bro. I don't think writing romance is good for you

No offence but the way you wrote the romance in this chapter was quite cringey and honestly feels fake.

Romance Potential is good in Pokémon Fanfic's. I just think that this Author shouldn't do it.. It is too Cringy and feels Immature. It's difficult to even read through the chapter without looking away with cringe. Such a big Contrast in comparison to the Story with is going along really Nice and Smoothly.

Imagine his battery died right there, he would've been so screwd

Well, that's why I hate emotions in general - they make you act not like yourself

ugh is so painful reading this chapter

Yikes, man. Nice job writing a teenage romance. I could feel the stupidity oozing out of them. You did a perfect job capturing an exchange between two people who choose the exact wrong way to treat someone you care about everytime.

Bro You are an awsome writer please write a Harry Potter book bro someone whOs older than cannon characTer and is strong and gets gradually strong like your pokemon please

Meh, I think this chapter came out a bit cringy, but I suppose love is that way. Also, I assumed Alex was going to get some "experience" before settling down with Maria.

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

This is the only thing that ruin this novel. Well maybe the author is a virgin in love, so he doesn't know how to write good romance story Cuz it's really become painful to read. I just read few words when it became awkward just skip the whole chapter.

Thanks for the Chapter.

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Thanks for the chapter author and editor sama 😊 please keep up the good work 😃

Thanks for the chapter, and nice chapter 1*69*

Thanks for the chapter. Progress on love?