Comments of chapter undefined of Mindfall Paradigm: The War Inside
Mindfall Paradigm: The War Inside
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tuba_sanLv3tuba_san
Since you're participating in an event I thought that I should help you out a bit. There were a few sentences where I thought a word was missing or something was off. I'll mark them through paragraph comments. This is just stuff I thought was off, it might actually be right, so make sure you just review it yourself before making any changes.
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tuba_san:I'm glad my notes helped you out! Unfortunately I can't really help you edit your novel, since I'm also an author on here (and need to work on my own novel), as well as the fact that my personal life is a bit hectic so I don't have any time to spare. Do search on the forum for editors, there are threads where editors promote themselves. And you can hire them to help you with your novel. I'm not sure about how much they charge so you can look for them and ask directly.
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