BlackbellDagger
Thank you for your thoughts, when I realized in my early writing I had a tendency to use a lot more than I needed to. while I'm constantly growing my skill I hope this doesn't affect your view of the total story so if you want to give it another try, they are more limited further on but it's still there as it is my style of writing.
Hello, I am kp (Editor at Goodnovel), Your novel has the potential and I would like to offer you to work with us. There is also an yearly contest going on with prize $15000 and your novel might have the chances of winning. Do give it a try. If you are interested in contracting your work, I welcome you as well. If you are interested or would like more information about this please mail me at kp_46@yahoo.com I would request you to keep the subject as (Author- Book name). Thankyou.