Comments of chapter undefined of That Time I Reincarnated as a Dungeon Master. (dead on webnovel)
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Commonnerfer
sorry but your stories no longer entertain me on The contrary i find them repetitive I tried to bear with it for a Long Time but its too slow content and words The same just with different plactment Time wise you say multiple Times about things that will happen without any place for surprise left everything is obvious and Simple and while I can accept Simple and obvious to A degree even I have my patience tested when theres nothing happening in Months IRL and im talking About Both of your stories here you tried with that dungeon part sure took A loong Time but u did it I guess But to be honest I skipped that cuz I couldnt read till The end without some excessive feelings bad feelings lets say your dungeon and The way you wrote about it is one of the worst ive ever read if not The worst and let me Tell you this ive read hundreds of dungeon type novels fanfic and played also games of that type as I quite like that genre so I be read some good dungeons and bad ones to compare and if I want to be Completely honest it took you days to write about that dungeon The instant ive read about creating A proper dungeon I already had an idea in mind A Creative and innovative idea that i might use if I were to write my own story that is it I find The Time as mostly I have to take Time out of my sleep to do shit even right now
well its a good idea to let rimuru to get used with his own power via diving at Dungeon unlike the cannon where he literally left most calculation to Raphael, its only before eastern empire invade (the ONE year timeskip) did he truly master his power as awakened demon lord albeit he still left the most unnecessarily complicate calculation to Ciel.
