FanficMortal
That part where he says he finally understands why Haki can't be learned without a guide was very... Forced. It isn't about right or wrong, I get that in a work of literature and fiction things are open to interpretation. The fact remains, that any One Piece fan Should have known what Magnus said to MC already. The only issue with haki not being known in canon is cuz people don't know about it and weak wills of majority of the population. I love your fic author-san, believe me I do, but that whole "I can't learn Haki without a guide" will remain a negative mark with the readers. Having said that, Kudos to you for continuing and building upon it tough, many just leave it under the pressure of those comments 👍!
Ayy y ahí lo tenemos las ideas de meditación del maestro misterioso, falta que le pregunten de dónde lo aprendió y diga la frase "no es simple"... Me gusta la manera en como escribes autor-san, pero no te dejes influenciar tanto por novelas chinas... Lo digo si haces otro fic este va a ser un cliché chino hasta el final...