Comments of chapter undefined of My Succubus System

Frankly I absolutely hate the start of this chapter. the transition between chapters and then “several konths earlier” or whatever is far to jarring

That part at the start was just plain bad writing and ruined the flow of the story. The mc hasn't stood out at anything good so far, we've seen mostly negatives about the mc and then this happens. Doesn't paint the mc in a good light at all and makes you start to wonder if you should continue reading.

flash cowards are garbage worse than flash backs

so ill be skipping ahead to see if continuing this book is at all worth it

nope nvm, not worth it

so there are man too 🤔

Thx for the chap