Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth of Immortal
Rebirth of Immortal
ShivYansh
Chapter comments5
The story is ruined. What's the point of having the Betrayal chapter of all he's going to be a system spirit? What's the point of revenge when he's not doing it? And the kid? Why would he care of getting revenge for someone he doesn't nor care?
Thanks for commenting bro. But i think that you should read the story from start or its description. There is two system spirits of system. One is outer system spirit and the another is the one you are talking about core spirit. Well, Core spirit Tian, he was killed in past but this story is not about his revenge. You will know about his story in future. The main character of this story is Tang Xiu who was betrayed. With his Reincarnation, he has forgotten his past memory like every person. In future he will know about his past of heaven world. I am a new writer. i am trying to do my best in writing. I hope all readers will drop their suggestions about this novel to let me know my mistakes. Thanks Readers.
