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Comments of chapter undefined of Dead Man’s Harem (R-18). Since I can’t kill myself, I’ll find other wa

WriterForFun80085
WriterForFun80085Lv10WriterForFun80085

Also, a tip for the author. When writing in the concept that Hades once flew into a rage over something and attempting to allude to such for later context, it is better to give a small piece of what happened, but not much. The reason behind this would be so that this certain scenario could be brought up in a smooth fashion, so that when this is explored, the reader wouldn't skim over the detail.

GodOfDeath1999
GodOfDeath1999Lv14GodOfDeath1999

Well it’s forced rape did you really expect these chapters to have a positive reception?

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Trpstars74
Trpstars74Lv4Trpstars74

So force rape is plot essencial really i mean if those where talking sure i just don't think force rape has Any plot essencial for the character unless you make more Sense it's not getting good commen it's just my opinion

BlackSwordman1234
BlackSwordman1234Lv14BlackSwordman1234

Yeah I dont care if you call it "plot esetiol" you could have just said the file wa lost disnt have to force a disgusting forced assault on us. Their is not a bit of use in having that their.

CapeWaffle
CapeWaffleLv4CapeWaffle

Just lowki disappointing, these last few chapters

FrightKnight88
FrightKnight88Lv14FrightKnight88

why not just push this into the end of last chapter? I'm done reading for a while, tires of getting jebaited into no actual plot progression in this story

TaplurX
TaplurXLv11TaplurX

Love how you guys add forced before rape as if rape is consensual

DarkApollyon
DarkApollyonLv15DarkApollyon

Ayy its just one mistake on a couple of chapters chillll. Let the author learn from their mistake before dropping. But i do agree that the last set of chapters made me feel really uncomfortable, especially her inner monologue.

MonoNautilus
MonoNautilusLv4MonoNautilus

hmm... why did it get censored? and if two out of 3 chapters that are plot essencial get censored, what will you do? also, I went read it elsewhere to sate my curiosity.

Beziik
BeziikLv14Beziik

I mean I never expected much from the novel, was it unnecessary? Maybe. Do I care enough about a weekly chapter kind of novel to be bothered by it? No, not at all.

SanchoPanza
SanchoPanzaLv6SanchoPanza

Quality chapter. Thanks

ManOfCulture69420
ManOfCulture69420Lv4ManOfCulture69420

Author my guy in here to see scenes of mc not to see another guy räpëïñg another woman

Dhunis_Zata
Dhunis_ZataLv3Dhunis_Zata

Seriously, you could just do a fade-to-black, with an emphasised implication, but you are padding your story with these chapters. Of course, this is your story, but I will honestly say that these chapters have been nothing but filler, which could have been skipped over with what I have mentioned above, and not even the type of filler that people enjoy either.

I_changedmyname
I_changedmynameLv13I_changedmyname

okay I'm only going to say this once this is 18+ in a magical world with gods and demons now this 'force rape' thing and people make a big deal of it now I think it was unnecessary yes but it's how it is and you forget about what the main character does because quite literally he force himself on anyone who is hot and tries to trick the princess or whoever she was when they were in the carriage and he still planning on doing it now, now let's see what's happening here 1.a arrogant God who forces himself on a demon which I forget what kind she is and it's my fault but if you ever read the history of the Olympians then you'll know what a 'force rape' is and by the way author how are you feeling because last time you said you weren't feeling well I hope you have a wonderful day

WriterForFun80085
WriterForFun80085Lv10WriterForFun80085

I'm going to keep reading, because despite the negative feedback from other readers, I think these chaps are fine as long it all makes sense and works out

Wrath1I
Wrath1ILv3Wrath1I

These previous chapters and this one was pretty bad for me but the story is good so far so well as long as it doesn't become recurring it's ok

Moby_Kane
Moby_KaneLv1Moby_Kane

lol I tho athour was the thrift for a sec

Pewmaymen
PewmaymenLv15Pewmaymen

I think the issues are the forced servicing (forced rape implies that sometimes rape isn’t forced?) and the attitude of Hades towards Hecate. He acts like she has control over what happened with Devon. The system chose Devon because his karma was basically off the charts and he didn’t want to go on living with memories of his past life. I am surprised Hades is annoyed at how Devon is acting since I assume he of all people knows what it takes to get that passive. That and it has been what, a week maybe?

RARC19
RARC19Lv4RARC19

Thanks for the chapter!

Reaper_210
Reaper_210Lv5Reaper_210

Thanks for the chapter