Comments of chapter undefined of What would you do if you suddenly fell in love?
What would you do if you suddenly fell in love?
Lazy_Acorn
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Thanks for the Chapter, if i am not wrong Why you felt it was streched is because you tookyour sweet time to make it in two part, if you do that in the furtur i would suggest make it in one go. and if possible release in on go xD it’s a bit Anoying to have cut in sex scene or a big important scene. but hey it’s my opinion not the opinion Of everyone. anyway good job With the diaLogue on the scene they were good ! SeRioulsy this book is a little gem in the rough just... sad that the speed of writting or having the time for you to do it is not regular nor quick. but hey if it’s what it takes to make good book then continue.
Initially, I intended to release everything in one chapter, but since it was big enough, I split it in two and used the week I would release the second half to make a drawing for the chapter. To be fair, if I didn't need to translate it into another language after writing, I think I could release 2 or 3 chap a week easily. Anyway, thanks for reading it!
