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Comments of chapter undefined of Pure Manipulation - MHA Fanfic (On Hold)

NebulousArcana
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Ya ok he just walks out of the hospital willy nilly after being confirmed to be a god, are you bullsh*ting me. ,_, "He can manipulate anything, Time, Space, Plants etc..." Are you kidding me? So can he manipulate temperature?? How about Gravity??? See the problem right out of the gate with this quirk is that its as OP as the reader can imagine. No matter the amount of training this mofo has to do, EVENTUALLY, he will be able to control a fundamental part of reality. A power that really doesn't mesh well with the strategic use of strengths and weaknesses that just about all MHA fights entail. For ducks sake his quirk doesn't have a weakness, rewrite this and just give him some type rune making ability that runs on blood stamina or internal power something. That way he can enchant gear n do physical combat while trying out new runes like explosives or weights and then eventually when you write enough filler and build up, his quirk awakens a second time and he can use the rune by just drawing them in the air or on flesh. Boop far more intresting, entails more rigorous training and creativity, more intrinsic and fundamental rules to appraoch the character and story with AND you don't lose out on the limitless possibilities aspect. Besides the quirk and non chalance of character. This chap was solid, but you can't come with divine might right out of the gate, atleast make him struggle sheesh.

NephHarris
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I understand what u are saying and had the same thought originally when making the character. However, his quirk is not only going to be really hard to use but also fairly taxing on his body. Also, in relation to being able to immediately manipulate anything, he technically can, but he first has to learn how. One of the drawbacks of his quirk is that he doesn't immediately have control over everything he can do with it. At first he can even use his quirk at all. I completely agree with what you're saying but I'm going to try to continue the story in a way that makes it enjoyable while still being an actual story, unlike "some other stories". I don't want him to be op, I just want him to be interesting.

ahmed_waleed_1200
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thanks for the chapter keep writing I like the fact he can manipulate everything even space and time

Etiger789
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There is no quick to see what other quirks are. It just wouldn't make sense, a quirk as powerful as that, would be shocking to most anyone unless this is a different univeres MHA fan fic.