Marli_Hanekom
Love love loved this story!!!! PppppaaaaaalllleaSe make one starting at this point forward I would love to see this turn into and awesome series!!!!! I loved it so much i read through it pretty quick and i loved How the chapters were longer and the way you wrote it how they were talking etc was perfect the small mistakes Didn’t even matter much BBC you wrote so good i loved how you built the characters and made side stories with them and gave pasts etc and the story line itself was awesome how you brought All of that together and how you came up with all of it was awesome!!!! I def Will read some more of your work…….. great job!!!!!