Comments of chapter undefined of Ito Ai: A New Dawn

Thx for the chapter! I really like where the story is going and the pacing seems a bit better. The first 30 chapters were kind of dry and it felt like you were just trying to get to the apocalypse more quickly. For any future stories I suggest you take a bit more time developing the world and characters since most of them were fairly boring, especially the parents. With the latest chapters we've seen character development for both Mai and Ai and I really like that. Anyway, I have high hopes so far!

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Congratulations Author on going premium. Ive really enjoyed this story so far and hope it continues for awhile! I'll be sure to try to allocate some fast passes towards this story in the future.

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