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Nice begginnig! Don't worry about errrors... we ALL here to learn, improve our skills.
Thank you
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NICE PLOT FOR A NEW WRITER, QUITE FAMILIAR WITH WORDS...
I can't wait to read it and I find the title catching my interest
Lovely It's great, I lovey
Nice beginning cool description and the characters are well explained
Nice chapter
I love this
Magnific đ
Amazing chapter 1 it can hook someone if they want a contemporary romance