Comments of chapter undefined of Love or Obsession?

This is a strong start. There is a lot you could add here. I feel like you rushed through this a bit. There is a lot of juicy details you could add. But of the few books I've read here, you easily have the best start. There is a book called The Emotion Thesaurus that would really help you out with properly writing emotions. It's about $17.00 USD on Amazon. I have friends who are published authors and they swear by this book.

I think I am gonna enjoy the read

so the woman breaks the brotherhood ?

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This is a great start can't wait to see how things pan out for the three friends

It's a good start but try to add more chapter

I have been in that position before and it hurts... Clara pls stay strong.. Nice one author more chapters please❤

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